tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9007887579503073604.post159645287735545405..comments2023-10-24T19:43:53.821+08:00Comments on a haiku poem blog: lesbian haiku poemkoujihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10808744780646134561noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9007887579503073604.post-70242134319836234502008-10-19T19:15:00.000+08:002008-10-19T19:15:00.000+08:00thanks for the comment, blogger in middle earth. :...thanks for the comment, blogger in middle earth. :)<BR/><BR/>indeed. basically, i cheated. :O couldn't fit the words into the required number of syllables, so i cut one out. :O<BR/><BR/>:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9007887579503073604.post-16586772102400977402008-10-19T07:03:00.000+08:002008-10-19T07:03:00.000+08:00Kia ora!I'm curious about "fam'ly", presumably to ...Kia ora!<BR/>I'm curious about "fam'ly", presumably to show pronunciation as famly, with 2 syllables rather than with 3 as in fam-i-ly. I understand the reason for this in the last line. This is an old poetic use of the apostrophe.<BR/><BR/>Perhaps I'm naive, but is it commonly used in haiku? I'm not lauching a criticism btw. I like the haiku.<BR/><BR/>Ka kite<BR/>from Middle-earthBlogger In Middle-earthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08722634477041121797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9007887579503073604.post-61062262823237837632008-10-16T01:10:00.000+08:002008-10-16T01:10:00.000+08:00thanks for the comment, merapuman. :)indeed. i lik...thanks for the comment, merapuman. :)<BR/><BR/>indeed. i like how her family took the news. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9007887579503073604.post-17468987489148106312008-10-15T12:57:00.000+08:002008-10-15T12:57:00.000+08:00visited the link. she is really lucky that her fam...visited the link. she is really lucky that her family accepted her as is :)<BR/>although she's not in that kind of relationship currently.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9007887579503073604.post-2168774927268553012008-10-14T12:59:00.000+08:002008-10-14T12:59:00.000+08:00thanks for the comment, janet. :)indeed. :)thanks for the comment, janet. :)<BR/><BR/>indeed. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9007887579503073604.post-62768485110772887742008-10-14T11:25:00.000+08:002008-10-14T11:25:00.000+08:00I think this applies to all sorts of relationship ...I think this applies to all sorts of relationship choices...beautifulJanethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05233108927583810009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9007887579503073604.post-21302980303151167682008-10-14T11:22:00.000+08:002008-10-14T11:22:00.000+08:00thanks for the comment, reader wil. :)glad you cou...thanks for the comment, reader wil. :)<BR/><BR/>glad you could visit. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9007887579503073604.post-60817704869860396452008-10-14T00:02:00.000+08:002008-10-14T00:02:00.000+08:00Thanks for your comment! I am not really good at h...Thanks for your comment! I am not really good at haikus, so I cannot comment on them,I am afraid!Reader Wilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06384603525251159272noreply@blogger.com