drift nature haiku poem

green to shades of red
they drift down, we rake, they pile
sweet smell of autumn


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a haiku poem contribution to:

Haiku Friday


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also posted on autumn haiku 2008


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10 comments:

  1. You have a gift for Haiku writing. I enjoyed the ones about your grandfather. I know you miss him.

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  2. i do miss him. thank you for your kind words, patsy.

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  3. It makes me look forward to fall. Makes me miss New England in the fall.

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  4. new england in the fall. sounds lovely. thanks for dropping by, heathery.

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  5. The mention of colours dramatically brings the feeling of autumn.

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  6. I recognize the Dutch autumn in your poem! Everything is still green here but soon yellow, dark red and gold will colour our country.

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  7. indeed. thank you for the comment, lahari.

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  8. thanks for the comment, reader wil. the colors are changing.

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  9. Fall is my favorite time of year!

    I can't wait for the leaves to start changing colors here... so beautiful!

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  10. thanks for the comment, honey mommy. :)

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