awry war haiku poem

a war gone awry
deflecting blame by blaming
hiatus? the same?


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a haiku poem for three word wednesday


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10 comments:

  1. JoyceSeptember 4, 2008 at 1:06 PM

    Thank you so much for visiting my 3 Word Wednesday. :)

    I do indeed agree with you:
    This war has gone awry. Was it ever lawful to begin with? :(

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  2. koujiSeptember 4, 2008 at 1:13 PM

    you're welcome, joyce. :) and thank you as well for stopping by. :)

    i only hope that the next president will be able to responsibly deal with the wars in iraq and afghanistan, end torture, and close guantanamo. :(

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  3. anthonynorthSeptember 4, 2008 at 6:09 PM

    That one was clever. I liked it.

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  4. koujiSeptember 4, 2008 at 6:17 PM

    thanks, anthonynorth. :)

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  5. poefusionSeptember 4, 2008 at 7:42 PM

    Very strong haiku, kouji. For me, this war was always awry. I don't think it was lawful as Joyce suggested and I certainly don't believe that we needed to have all that torture. I too hope that the new President will work hard to eradicate this war. I for one and ready for some changes. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day.

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  6. koujiSeptember 4, 2008 at 7:45 PM

    thanks, michelle. :) hope you have a nice day as well.

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  7. TCSeptember 4, 2008 at 10:22 PM

    I think almost all wars go awry, no?

    Doesn't make them any less sad though.

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  8. koujiSeptember 5, 2008 at 5:13 AM

    true. wars are large, ugly, brutish things, which a huge tendency to get out of control. thanks for the comment, tc.

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  9. Gemma WisemanSeptember 5, 2008 at 7:07 PM

    I simply don't believe any war can go well! There is always someone who hurts for the sake of another's glory!

    Very clever haiku though!

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  10. koujiSeptember 5, 2008 at 7:18 PM

    thanks, greyscale territory. :)

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