awry war haiku poem

a war gone awry
deflecting blame by blaming
hiatus? the same?


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a haiku poem for three word wednesday


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10 comments:

Joyce said...

Thank you so much for visiting my 3 Word Wednesday. :)

I do indeed agree with you:
This war has gone awry. Was it ever lawful to begin with? :(

kouji said...

you're welcome, joyce. :) and thank you as well for stopping by. :)

i only hope that the next president will be able to responsibly deal with the wars in iraq and afghanistan, end torture, and close guantanamo. :(

anthonynorth said...

That one was clever. I liked it.

kouji said...

thanks, anthonynorth. :)

Michelle Johnson said...

Very strong haiku, kouji. For me, this war was always awry. I don't think it was lawful as Joyce suggested and I certainly don't believe that we needed to have all that torture. I too hope that the new President will work hard to eradicate this war. I for one and ready for some changes. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day.

kouji said...

thanks, michelle. :) hope you have a nice day as well.

TC said...

I think almost all wars go awry, no?

Doesn't make them any less sad though.

kouji said...

true. wars are large, ugly, brutish things, which a huge tendency to get out of control. thanks for the comment, tc.

Greyscale Territory said...

I simply don't believe any war can go well! There is always someone who hurts for the sake of another's glory!

Very clever haiku though!

kouji said...

thanks, greyscale territory. :)

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