slow nature haiku poem

slow rustle of leaves
the wind nudging green and brown
childhood memories


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a haiku poem for autumn haiku 2008


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10 comments:

  1. Art and PoetrySeptember 17, 2008 at 4:46 PM

    Lovely one!

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2008 at 4:57 PM

    thanks for the comment, art and poetry. :)

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  3. UnknownSeptember 18, 2008 at 1:42 AM

    I really like this one, kouji, well done :)

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2008 at 8:00 AM

    thanks for the comment, winter moth. :)

    am glad you like it. :)

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2008 at 9:33 AM

    slow in my place too
    gentle wind blows green pine trees
    my own yesterday


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    This is fun!

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2008 at 11:22 AM

    thanks for the comment, gem. :)

    lovely last line... my own yesterday. i do miss the smell of pine in the air. haven't been back in baguio to see relatives for a while.

    true. quite fun for me as well. i find myself thinking of haiku in the shower. :)

    and i learned that the haiku community is very kind to novices like me.

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2008 at 3:32 PM

    @kouji
    thanks, i love that last line too

    and i would agree about getting around haiku community. ;-)

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  8. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2008 at 3:36 PM

    thanks for dropping by again, gem. :)

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  9. Crafty Green PoetSeptember 19, 2008 at 2:54 PM

    this is lovely,

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 19, 2008 at 3:17 PM

    thanks for the comment, crafty green poet. :)

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