loss friendship haiku poem

a sense of great loss
a time of heartache and grief
around us, good friends


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23 comments:

  1. PatOctober 3, 2008 at 5:39 PM

    I especially enjoyed your haiku today. On October 2nd I posted a photo that will explain to you why. See: http://yankee-in-belgrade.blogspot.com

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  2. AnonymousOctober 3, 2008 at 6:18 PM

    thanks for the comment, bibi. :)

    will check out your photo shortly.

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  3. GemOctober 3, 2008 at 7:04 PM

    i lost a close friend
    she thought it's the end of all
    we're around too late


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    well, reminded me of that loss years ago; she's still too young.

    i hope i made sense. haha!

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  4. AnonymousOctober 3, 2008 at 7:12 PM

    thanks for the comment, gem. :)

    and thanks for the lines. :) glad you could drop by.

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  5. AnonymousOctober 3, 2008 at 8:55 PM

    I thing the poem is less about the loss, but more about the support of your friends and family that you get in a time of loss.

    The times are difficult but and the haiku is trying to get you to look at your support and not dwell on the loss.

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  6. AnonymousOctober 3, 2008 at 8:59 PM

    thanks for the comment, adam. :)

    indeed. the loss results in a moment where those around you manifest their support and concern.

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  7. Devika JyothiOctober 4, 2008 at 2:00 AM

    i relate with this...
    devika

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  8. Maria VerivakiOctober 4, 2008 at 2:17 AM

    too sad for me today - i had a good day!

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  9. AnonymousOctober 4, 2008 at 3:43 AM

    thanks for the comment, devika. :)

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  10. AnonymousOctober 4, 2008 at 3:43 AM

    thanks for the comment, mediterranean kiwi. :)

    glad to hear you had a good day.

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  11. Art and PoetryOctober 4, 2008 at 4:01 AM

    For some reason sad poery always sounds good! it is very odd.

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  12. steven wilsonOctober 4, 2008 at 8:30 AM

    having good friends around in time of greif is a wonderful thing that one must experience to understand.

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  13. AnonymousOctober 4, 2008 at 11:28 AM

    thanks for the comment, art and poetry. :)

    interesting observation...

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  14. AnonymousOctober 4, 2008 at 11:29 AM

    thanks for the comment, steven wilson. :)

    indeed.

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  15. J. Andrew LockhartOctober 4, 2008 at 11:31 AM

    how sad, but how well said!

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  16. AnonymousOctober 4, 2008 at 11:54 AM

    thanks for the comment, andrew.

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  17. AnonymousOctober 4, 2008 at 12:47 PM

    loss is always a part of life. sad especially if one is family. i had my share of grief and thank you for this beautiful piece.

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  18. AnonymousOctober 4, 2008 at 2:58 PM

    thanks for the comment, estan.

    indeed. most of us have had our share of grief.

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  19. AnonymousOctober 5, 2008 at 12:51 PM

    Sad but beautiful at the same time.

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  20. AnonymousOctober 5, 2008 at 1:03 PM

    thanks for the comment, maggie's mind. :)

    glad you could visit. :)

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  21. AnonymousApril 22, 2009 at 11:50 AM

    thanks for the haiku

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  22. AnonymousAugust 10, 2009 at 6:06 PM

    thanks for this haiku. now I'll have an idea how to make a haiku poem. cause it's our project, to make our own haiku poems.

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  23. AnonymousAugust 11, 2009 at 8:06 PM

    .i loss a best friend.
    .that cheers me up everyday.
    .please don't go away.

    .gosh.
    .i miss my old friends.

    .if we make new friends remember to keep in touch with your old friends.

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