loss friendship haiku poem

a sense of great loss
a time of heartache and grief
around us, good friends


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23 comments:

  1. I especially enjoyed your haiku today. On October 2nd I posted a photo that will explain to you why. See: http://yankee-in-belgrade.blogspot.com

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  2. thanks for the comment, bibi. :)

    will check out your photo shortly.

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  3. i lost a close friend
    she thought it's the end of all
    we're around too late


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    well, reminded me of that loss years ago; she's still too young.

    i hope i made sense. haha!

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  4. thanks for the comment, gem. :)

    and thanks for the lines. :) glad you could drop by.

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  5. Adam - Creadiv.comOctober 3, 2008 at 8:55 PM

    I thing the poem is less about the loss, but more about the support of your friends and family that you get in a time of loss.

    The times are difficult but and the haiku is trying to get you to look at your support and not dwell on the loss.

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  6. thanks for the comment, adam. :)

    indeed. the loss results in a moment where those around you manifest their support and concern.

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  7. too sad for me today - i had a good day!

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  8. thanks for the comment, devika. :)

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  9. thanks for the comment, mediterranean kiwi. :)

    glad to hear you had a good day.

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  10. For some reason sad poery always sounds good! it is very odd.

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  11. having good friends around in time of greif is a wonderful thing that one must experience to understand.

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  12. thanks for the comment, art and poetry. :)

    interesting observation...

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  13. thanks for the comment, steven wilson. :)

    indeed.

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  14. thanks for the comment, andrew.

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  15. loss is always a part of life. sad especially if one is family. i had my share of grief and thank you for this beautiful piece.

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  16. thanks for the comment, estan.

    indeed. most of us have had our share of grief.

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  17. Sad but beautiful at the same time.

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  18. thanks for the comment, maggie's mind. :)

    glad you could visit. :)

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  19. thanks for the haiku

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  20. thanks for this haiku. now I'll have an idea how to make a haiku poem. cause it's our project, to make our own haiku poems.

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  21. .i loss a best friend.
    .that cheers me up everyday.
    .please don't go away.

    .gosh.
    .i miss my old friends.

    .if we make new friends remember to keep in touch with your old friends.

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