loss friendship haiku poem

a sense of great loss
a time of heartache and grief
around us, good friends


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20 comments:

Bibi said...

I especially enjoyed your haiku today. On October 2nd I posted a photo that will explain to you why. See: http://yankee-in-belgrade.blogspot.com

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, bibi. :)

will check out your photo shortly.

Gem said...

i lost a close friend
she thought it's the end of all
we're around too late


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well, reminded me of that loss years ago; she's still too young.

i hope i made sense. haha!

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, gem. :)

and thanks for the lines. :) glad you could drop by.

Adam - Creadiv.com said...

I thing the poem is less about the loss, but more about the support of your friends and family that you get in a time of loss.

The times are difficult but and the haiku is trying to get you to look at your support and not dwell on the loss.

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, adam. :)

indeed. the loss results in a moment where those around you manifest their support and concern.

Devika said...

i relate with this...
devika

MEDITERRANEAN KIWI said...

too sad for me today - i had a good day!

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, devika. :)

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, mediterranean kiwi. :)

glad to hear you had a good day.

steven wilson said...

having good friends around in time of greif is a wonderful thing that one must experience to understand.

Art and Poetry said...

For some reason sad poery always sounds good! it is very odd.

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, art and poetry. :)

interesting observation...

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, steven wilson. :)

indeed.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

how sad, but how well said!

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, andrew.

estan said...

loss is always a part of life. sad especially if one is family. i had my share of grief and thank you for this beautiful piece.

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, estan.

indeed. most of us have had our share of grief.

maggie's mind said...

Sad but beautiful at the same time.

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, maggie's mind. :)

glad you could visit. :)

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