halloween again
trick or treating, much candy
their father's sweet tooth
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It's a good one! I find it most difficult to put humour in rhyme and it must be even harder with a haiku.
ReplyDeletehmmm... the site doesn't accept my comments... lemme try again
ReplyDeleteswitched to 5-7-5, i see. this can work nicely but sometimes the haiku appear too wordy.
well, i know what haloween is about, in the rough at least, but we have not really adopted it. i'm fine with that, though
I have not even purchased halloween candy yet! Probably because I'd eat it all!
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, art and poetry. :)
ReplyDeleteah, humor in verse is just horrible for me. :O quite difficult. i don't usually try. :)
thanks for the comment, polona. :)
ReplyDeleteglad you tried again. :) true. :( i do feel that at times i'm merely chasing syllables. i like the idea of 5-7-5 because it gives me a structure to work with, but often i think of just setting it as a maximum , so i can come up with less wordy verse. :O
true. we hardly have any trick or treating over here. although of course, the stores try to play up halloween. :)
thanks for the comment, honey mommy. :)
ReplyDeleteindeed. it's a great day for candy lovers. :O
hehe. sweet tooth indeed!
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, jeanie. :)
ReplyDeleteindeed. :) i miss candy. :O
Mommy has a sweet tooth. My kids have their costumes and they are ready to go!
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, undercover-princess. :)
ReplyDeleteuh oh. :O if wonder how much candy'll be left for the kids. :D
I already purchased some holloween sweets for kids that will be knocking on our doors these coming november. I kinda noticed that children that are trick or treating are getting a bit choosy on their sweets. Last year I was giving away malteesers in small packs and a little girl dressed in a fairy asked me if I have some M&M's.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, dan the man. :)
ReplyDeleteah. i do love those m&m's though. :D
dont we all have a sweet tooth? i know i do, no matter how much i try to avoid it
ReplyDeleteI was catching up on some of your poems - great as always :) You should definitely turn a couple of these into Wordles, that would be neat to see!
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, mediterranean kiwi. :)
ReplyDeletetrue. man, i miss chocolate. :(
thanks for the comment, chelle. :)
ReplyDeletewas thinking about that. i've seen a couple of wordles and they look quite interesting.
Great little Haiku..will love to write one myself one day.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, qimans world. :)
ReplyDeletei found it rather fun once i got started. :)