autumn gunfire haiku poem

autumn morning
gunfire
crimson everwhere


a haiku example for autumn haiku 2008.


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14 comments:

  1. Wow...this is quite an interesting one...each line seeming to pull in a different direction, though all ultimately coming together...if in a somewhat unsettling way....

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  2. @yogaforcynics

    ah. indeed. i'm glad you found it interesting. :)

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  3. truly crimson is an autumn color.

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  4. This is an interesting one Kouji...

    something very peculiar about it :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  5. It does seem sad, but we need hunters in the world. Hope you are having a lovely Sunday.

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  6. Smelling blood in the air, but, then again, could be the good old Guns and Roses back on stage...!:)

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  7. A powerful impact - one I hope to never see...

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  8. @janet

    strangely enough, it's the first time i've used that word all autumn...

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  9. @devika

    thanks for visiting. :)

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  10. @life with kaishon

    indeed. i have no quarrel with most hunters. :) hope you had a great sunday too. :)

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  11. @mediterranean kiwi

    thanks. :)

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  12. @borut

    ah. :) and yet, no november rain?

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  13. @janice thomson

    indeed. same here.

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