autumn leaves haiku poem

pile of leaves
the urge to play
outgrown


a haiku example for autumn haiku 2008.


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17 comments:

  1. Oh isn't that the truth - good one Kouji!

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  2. Not for me LOL - I still want to roll around in them.

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  3. Like the leaves themselves! Wonderful work.

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  4. Nice one! it is sad if we outgrow the urge to play.

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  5. that's a sad little haiku!
    I'm a new fan of this blog. You can say so much with so few syllables!
    keep it up :)


    check out my poetry at http://poetrydiscovered.blogspot.com

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  6. Hello my friend. I love your Haiku poetry. What form are you using? This is Beloved Dreamer and I too love the sharp and clear meaning of Haiku.

    love-bd

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  7. another nice haiku...hey dude a request , would you like to check out my poems, some haikus too at http://butru.blogspot.com and please your comments will be highly appreciated

    keshav

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  8. thanks for the comment, janice thomson. :)

    True. I wouldn't mind rolling around in a pile of leaves myself. :)

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  9. thank for the comment, sandy carlson. :)

    True. Just like the leaves themselves. :)

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  10. Thanks for the comment, art and poetry. :)

    true. I hope I never reach the point where I no longer feel like I can play and be silly. :)

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  11. Thanks for the comment, Stephanie. :)

    And thanks for dropping by. I'll try to swing by your blog soon as well. :)

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  12. thanks for the comment, polona. :)

    I'm glad you like. :)

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  13. Thanks for the comment, Melanie. :)

    I go with three lines, at most 17 syllables, but under that possible. Thanks for visiting. :)

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  14. thanks for the comment, keshav. :)

    i'll try to swing by your blog soon. :)

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  15. thanks for the comment, jeanie. :)

    no leafy piles here though. :) just soggy grass. :O

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