forest leaf haiku poem

a leaf falls
in the forest
does it make a sound?


a haiku example for autumn haiku 2008.


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10 comments:

  1. Janice ThomsonNovember 20, 2008 at 11:27 AM

    They do here because they're usually brown and crunchy before falling a lot of the time ...

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  2. Maria VerivakiNovember 20, 2008 at 4:41 PM

    nice one

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  3. AnonymousNovember 21, 2008 at 2:00 AM

    Your Poem today actually made me close my eyes and visualize the leaf falling! Thank you kouji!

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  4. AnonymousNovember 21, 2008 at 3:37 AM

    Good question! Lovely haiku too. :)

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  5. koujiNovember 21, 2008 at 12:52 PM

    @janice thomson

    ah nice. crunchy sounds. :)

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  6. koujiNovember 21, 2008 at 12:52 PM

    @mediterranean kiwi

    thanks. :)

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  7. koujiNovember 21, 2008 at 12:53 PM

    @lori cordeiro

    cool. :) that's what this's about... trying to convey an image. thanks. :)

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  8. koujiNovember 21, 2008 at 12:53 PM

    @aly

    thanks. :)

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  9. AnonymousNovember 21, 2008 at 6:12 PM

    forest leaf
    mites and a grasshopper
    on each other

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  10. koujiNovember 22, 2008 at 11:56 AM

    @martin

    excellent! especially like the idea of layers here. :)

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