pond ripples haiku poem

ripples mar
the pond's surface
then all is still


a haiku poem for abc wednesday round 3. r is for ripples. :)


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18 comments:

  1. Jala PfaffNovember 21, 2008 at 5:26 PM

    nice one!

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  2. Janice ThomsonNovember 21, 2008 at 5:39 PM

    This is beautiful! - love the image it creates.

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  3. AnonymousNovember 21, 2008 at 6:00 PM

    wetland chill
    a patch of ripples disappears

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  4. Maria VerivakiNovember 21, 2008 at 9:25 PM

    lovely one for today!

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  5. Devika JyothiNovember 21, 2008 at 10:35 PM

    A very true imagery of 'nature' ..

    nice one!

    wishes!
    devika

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  6. Raquel Sabino PereiraNovember 21, 2008 at 10:51 PM

    I love youR poems! This is a gReat and oRiginal idea, to post poems associated to ABC!...

    On behalf of ABC TEAM I thank you foR youR wondeRful contRibution and ask you to please staRt thinking about «S»! hehehe

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  7. Art and PoetryNovember 22, 2008 at 4:11 AM

    There is something about ripples that are poetic, nice Haiku!

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  8. AnonymousNovember 22, 2008 at 10:34 AM

    Hi kouji,
    "r is for ripples", very catchy! I liked the poem, i used to live on a pond and I would like to again someday!

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  9. koujiNovember 22, 2008 at 12:03 PM

    @jala pfaff

    thanks. :)

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  10. koujiNovember 22, 2008 at 12:03 PM

    @janice thomson

    thanks. :) glad you like it.

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  11. koujiNovember 22, 2008 at 12:03 PM

    @martin

    excellent! :O

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  12. koujiNovember 22, 2008 at 12:04 PM

    @mediterranean kiwi

    thanks. :) and thanks for visiting. :)

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  13. koujiNovember 22, 2008 at 12:04 PM

    @devika

    thanks. :)

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  14. koujiNovember 22, 2008 at 12:05 PM

    @sailor girl

    hey, thanks. :) i do feel a bit weird about my inability to post images of my own. :O hopefully i can change that once i get around to getting a camera. :)

    s is for... sailor girl? :)

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  15. koujiNovember 22, 2008 at 12:06 PM

    @art and poetry

    indeed. i wanted to do a haiku involving ripples and the surface of one's mind, but couldn't figure it out. :O maybe the next one. :)

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  16. koujiNovember 22, 2008 at 12:07 PM

    @lori cordeiro

    it's cool that you used to live near a body of water. :) would love to have a place by the sea someday. :)

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  17. AnonymousNovember 23, 2008 at 6:20 PM

    i love this haiku! :) nice one kouji!

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  18. koujiNovember 26, 2008 at 7:24 PM

    @jeanie

    thanks. :)

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