autumn winter haiku poem

dry leaf
now brittle
with frost


a haiku poem for autumn haiku 2008.


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9 comments:

  1. Art and PoetryDecember 2, 2008 at 3:26 AM

    Nice one! we have frost here too

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  2. Janice ThomsonDecember 2, 2008 at 9:23 AM

    Oh! It needs some Vaseline Hand Care lotion :)

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  3. AnonymousDecember 2, 2008 at 1:55 PM

    That's a great one--really capturing leaf-ness--as well as the passing of one season to another....

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  4. koujiDecember 2, 2008 at 2:09 PM

    @art and poetry

    cool. :) not a hint of frost here. no ice, no snow. mostly warm days, rain, and green leaves all around. :)

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  5. koujiDecember 2, 2008 at 2:09 PM

    @janice thomson

    indeed. :) it needs a moisturizing regiment. :)

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  6. koujiDecember 2, 2008 at 2:10 PM

    @yogaforcynics

    thanks. :) what i was trying to do... transition from fall to winter...

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  7. AnonymousMarch 21, 2009 at 5:23 AM

    this poem is wack you need to make it longer...but i like it though

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  8. LottieJuly 31, 2009 at 1:34 PM

    thats cool but i thot haiku poems go... 5 syllables, 7 syllables, then 5 syllables...???

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  9. eveAugust 5, 2009 at 2:47 PM

    ....good @ nIce haiku....
    ,,,wiSh you a Luck!!!

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