dog barking haiku poem

next door's dog
mad barking
cut off


a haiku poem based on this post at past tense. :)


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6 comments:

  1. AshiDecember 18, 2008 at 2:38 AM

    It's a fine followed up on Andrew's poem.
    And your twist made me do a few lines too.

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  2. Haiku ExpeditionsJanuary 18, 2009 at 3:57 PM

    minimalist haiku. way to go. not counting 5-7-5 is the best. :)
    http://haikuexpeditions.com/

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  3. AnonymousMarch 27, 2009 at 9:03 AM

    haiku has 17 syllables not 8 sylybles

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  4. AnonymousApril 23, 2009 at 6:08 AM

    i don't like it!

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  5. AnonymousJuly 8, 2009 at 4:40 PM

    How about this on that same dog:

    lying in her arms
    as the next door neighbour's dog
    howls at the full moon

    John Hawkhead

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  6. frewakSeptember 10, 2009 at 5:31 PM

    eww ~~
    this is not a haiku !! gosh !!

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