dog barking haiku poem

next door's dog
mad barking
cut off


a haiku poem based on this post at past tense. :)


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6 comments:

  1. It's a fine followed up on Andrew's poem.
    And your twist made me do a few lines too.

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  2. minimalist haiku. way to go. not counting 5-7-5 is the best. :)
    http://haikuexpeditions.com/

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  3. haiku has 17 syllables not 8 sylybles

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  4. i don't like it!

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  5. How about this on that same dog:

    lying in her arms
    as the next door neighbour's dog
    howls at the full moon

    John Hawkhead

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  6. eww ~~
    this is not a haiku !! gosh !!

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