ice skating haiku poem

i trip
a skater's blades
my fingers


a haiku poem for winter haiku 2008/2009. :)


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48 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 7, 2008 at 6:21 AM

    Wow--you made me wince...in a good way, though. Still, I hope you're not talking about any actual incident involving your actual fingers?

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  2. UnknownDecember 8, 2008 at 8:49 AM

    That sounds painful!
    My blog friend mary is having a fundraiser for kids with cancer. Even dollar donations are helpful. And, there is a great raffle. Can you go check it out?
    http://elementl-p.blogspot.com/
    I know you do a lot of things that change the world : ). Thank you!

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  3. UnknownDecember 9, 2008 at 10:50 AM

    Hi Kouji!

    How are you?

    I am inviting you to my BoL's Brain Pain. Don't worry, it's not as hard as what the title sounds (grin).

    I hope to see you there!

    xoxo,
    Jona

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  4. Captain USpaceDecember 10, 2008 at 3:28 AM

    OUCH! Sounds painful, be careful...

    :)

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  5. GemDecember 10, 2008 at 11:03 AM

    Is it bleeding? I hope these are okay.

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  6. JanetDecember 11, 2008 at 7:02 AM

    I hope you did not bleed:-)

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  7. AnonymousDecember 12, 2008 at 12:12 AM

    kouji, I loved this poem. I miss ice skating, (can't do it because of my strokes), but I used to love to ice skate since I was a child. Thank you for helping me remember the good times!
    Your friend, Lori

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  8. CynthiaDecember 25, 2008 at 12:03 PM

    sweet.

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  9. the spool artistDecember 25, 2008 at 8:14 PM

    have a very merry Christmas kouji! wishing you the best of the season and a brighter 2009!

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  10. UnknownDecember 27, 2008 at 2:56 AM

    Merry Christmas! Hope you had a special day!

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  11. AnonymousDecember 27, 2008 at 1:40 PM

    These are all very wonderful word images. I thought Haiku, however, was a strict 17 syllable poem with 5,7,5 syllable in three lines...Lord knows I could be wrong... just wondering...As I said before these present wonderful images

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  12. The Pool of ZenDecember 31, 2008 at 6:57 AM

    I love it!!! I've been working on my web page for a week or so.... Today I'm cruising similar sites and found yours.... It's like a mirror image... only your Haiku are better!!!

    Check mine out, I'll tag yours as one to read!

    www.poolofzen.com

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  13. AshiJanuary 1, 2009 at 5:02 PM

    Happy New Year Kouji,
    it happens to us all.

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  14. UnknownJanuary 4, 2009 at 1:57 AM

    where did you go?

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  15. AnonymousJanuary 5, 2009 at 12:27 PM

    seriously,

    five seven then five
    syllables mark a haiku
    remarkable oaf

    -Avatar: The Last Airbender

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  16. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2009 at 9:20 AM

    I am pretty light on poetry form, as a freeform poet, but isn't Haiku supposed to be 5 syllabal, 7 syllabal, 5 syllabal. Your Haiku's dont' stay consistant, not even 2,4,2 or 3,4,3, they don't have any construct to be formal Haiku's.

    Is there a new type of Haiku construct like freeform Haiku?

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  17. MargieJanuary 11, 2009 at 1:59 PM

    I have enjoyed reading your haikus.
    I've never tried my hand at haiku writing but like them very much.
    Good in here!

    Margie

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  18. Devika JyothiJanuary 14, 2009 at 1:28 AM

    I came after a long long while Kouji..

    and you weren't posting since long...and the last one is upsetting too

    Hope all is fine Kouji,
    and hope to see you posting soon..

    wishes,
    devika

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  19. the spool artistJanuary 15, 2009 at 7:53 PM

    ouch! somehow that's gotta hurt!

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  20. GemJanuary 20, 2009 at 3:28 PM

    I wonder what you're up to! :-)

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  21. BNIguyJanuary 21, 2009 at 1:19 AM

    North Carolina
    rarely sees snow. Today is
    a welcome delight.

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  22. AnonymousJanuary 21, 2009 at 5:15 PM

    hi!
    i love your site because i love poetry.
    hmmm, just a query, isn't a haiku supposed to follow the 5-7-5 versification?

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  23. AnonymousJanuary 28, 2009 at 1:35 PM

    great haiku i could really see what you were trying to show. great haiku i hope you right more and post them on the blog.

    p.s. hope to read more by for now by
    sks

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  24. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2009 at 6:34 AM

    Ouch! sounds painful...

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  25. or, IdunFebruary 7, 2009 at 1:58 PM

    hi, just dropped by your blog and bookmarked it. your poems are really nice, keep up good work :)

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  26. Beatrice VFebruary 8, 2009 at 6:50 PM

    Ouch! Hope the fingers are Ok:) Hello Kouji, I haven't been around -too busy for a while, hope to be more fruitful -poetically, soon. The Spring Blog has now been set up and it opens on the 25th February, I look forward to seeing you there, I can add you to the list as soon as you send in the details. Best wishes, Beatrice
    http://spring-haiku2009.blogspot.com/

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  27. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2009 at 9:25 AM

    Hi kouji,

    you've got wonderful haiku poems here. perhaps you could drop by my forum too and you share more about haiku poems. My forum's on http://puretalk.info

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  28. The SpectatorFebruary 13, 2009 at 10:24 AM

    two ravens in a tree
    backlit by the rising sun—
    his 200th anniversary

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  29. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2009 at 4:19 AM

    really like your poems and your blog. please consider creating a profile on createculture.org-a social network for poets, writers, and artists. members of this network would really enjoy reading your poems and learning about your blog.

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  30. walkerFebruary 23, 2009 at 11:54 AM

    I just stumbled across this place on Technorati, I like what you're doing here. This one is maybe my favorite so far, it's really vivid and slicing. Which is to say, the images work well with each other, but they're not too obvious, either.

    Good stuff.

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  31. AnonymousMarch 4, 2009 at 10:28 AM

    Love your haiku, all of them. Thank you for the enjoyable read.

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  32. Wayne PitchkoMarch 24, 2009 at 2:29 AM

    I like this ..i just cut my finger playing hockey...by a skate of course.

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  33. Wayne PitchkoMarch 24, 2009 at 2:30 AM

    I just cut my finger playing hockey....by a skate..nice poem...sore finger

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  34. UnknownApril 1, 2009 at 4:18 AM

    "i trip" is two syllables
    "a skater's blades" is four
    "my fingers" is three

    Failure

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  35. KimmyApril 21, 2009 at 2:28 AM

    Love this haiku! It reminds me of friends who've taken serious falls and the consequences of such!
    :)
    Well done.
    Love the layout of your blog, it's the same template I have!
    I subscribed to your feed and will be looking for your poems!

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  36. SreelathaMay 6, 2009 at 8:02 PM

    Nice Haiku!

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  37. HoneyBeeMay 13, 2009 at 3:52 PM

    May I say that it's cute? It's an ouch after a fall, a nice touch to end it. I'm delighted to have found this blog =)

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  38. haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)June 5, 2009 at 7:37 PM

    Ouch!!!! (or as we say in Germany: Aua!!!!!)

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  39. AnonymousJuly 16, 2009 at 11:00 PM

    hello... hapi blogging... have a nice day! just visiting here....

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  40. UnknownJuly 24, 2009 at 7:44 PM

    Hi there -

    I have started my own haiku blog. It can be found at www.onehaiku.wordpress.com

    More to come!

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  41. The Snappy SparrowAugust 10, 2009 at 1:54 AM

    wow nice poems :)

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  42. Ron EklofSeptember 7, 2009 at 9:18 PM

    Kouji,
    It's been a long time
    You disappeared from our lives
    Hoping you are well

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  43. AnonymousSeptember 8, 2009 at 10:12 PM

    ouch.

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  44. ShirleySeptember 12, 2009 at 8:00 AM

    I love this haiku and all the others. Thank you !

    I am following your blog. My blog is at poems4everydayuse.blogspot.com

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  45. AnonymousNovember 17, 2009 at 12:15 PM

    This is not a haiku.

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  46. HaiQkingNovember 26, 2009 at 7:57 PM

    A lot of good haikupoems here! I will read more and follow your blog ;)

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  47. Titia LloydJanuary 1, 2010 at 5:04 AM

    You might like to post links to some of your wonderful haiku on a weekly haiku meme blog I know of. It is named Haiku Bones and the poets there are very friendly and constructive. ^_^'

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  48. dimaksJanuary 14, 2010 at 6:17 AM

    this is brilliant! the theme is seasonal and yet, well rounded essence.

    glad to be back here in your haiku blog :) get those haiku poem flowing like water.

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