the last time i
left the house
a haiku poem based on this post at the haiku diaries. :)
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The surprise ending is very effective. Closes well.
ReplyDelete@ken
ReplyDeletethanks. :)
I like this - leaves me with a couple different viewpoints. Excellent Kouji.
ReplyDelete@janice thomson
ReplyDeletethanks. :) i'm glad you like it.
you should leave the house when you can :) it's healthy. hope you get some fun adventures soon!
ReplyDeletethese arent proper haiku you know
ReplyDeleteits all about the syllables in each line
5 in the 1st
7 in the 2nd
5 in the 3rd...
look heres one of mine...
I smile, then look up,
Although were so far apart,
The stars are our heart.♥
you get what i meen?
sorry im doing it in english at school. haha.
oh and umm im 12 years old ;)
but its really good :)
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