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.."soft yellow survives"_there's great resolve in softness.thanks for sharing this..
and thank you for visiting, zoya. :)
the image the immediately lept to mind is a yellow dandelion pushing up through the stones!
indeed. :D thanks for visiting, sue. :)
I've been enjoying your all of your haiku here! I want to wish you all the best in your upcoming bar exams. It will be grueling, no doubt. Take some of this soft yellow resolve along with you!
thanks for the kind words, barbs. :)
Captures the strength and the gentleness - very nice!
thanks for the kind words, deborah. :)
An important point here - that the pliable survives best.
so true. reminds me of the job market. in this day and age, it's those who are able to adapt the quickest to conditions, who thrive. thanks for the comment, anthonynorth. :)
Determination and strength come in many forms. Well done. I see from Barb's comment that you are about to take the Bar Exam. Good luck.
thanks for the kind words, raven. :) and thanks for visiting.
thanks for the kind words, leatherdykeuk. :)
I really like how you used the change in texture in the first and third lines of the haiku. Very effective.
thank you for the kind words, pam. :)
I enjoyed that. Makes me think of the effects of sunlight on stone and how it softens these objects.
true... didn't think of that... but sometimes the way sunlight strikes objects does make them seem warmer, smoothing out the rough and sharp edges. thanks for the comment, sandycarlson. :)
I can see this! Your words create an image in my mind.
i'm glad. :) thanks for visiting, me ann my camera. :)
In Delhi's heat, I totally relate with this!Ruing
thankfully, it isn't as hot over here anymore. :) thanks for dropping by, gautami. :)
I love that 'soft yellow survives' line. Just great!
This is nice, but then as read down the page, all of your poems are.I like your new look, too.
am glad you liked it, teric. :)
thanks, fourwindshaiga. :)
Excellent use of the prompt! Very vivid and visual haiku!
thanks for the kind words, tumblewords. :)
I concur this was an excellent interpretation.
thank you for the kind words, quiet paths. :)
soft yellow.. a striking contrast.. haiku is from heaven...
thank you for the kind words, one more believer.
If you have half as much talent taking tests as you do in crafting haiku, the bar will be a piece of cake!
that's kind of you to say, karen. :)
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