cool clear light inside
family having dinner
outside, only dark
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Very strong image kouji, evokes fond childhood memories for me. Thanks :)
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, winter moth. :)
ReplyDeleteglad it caused fond memories to surface for you. :)
I find myself dancing back and forth between the inside and the outside. great balance of light and dark.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, janet. :)
ReplyDeletethe last line came to me first, and i wrote the first two in response to that.
oh yes, this is really a good one. i write haikus too. well. sometimes lol
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, totomai. :)
ReplyDeletecool that you write them too. :)
i dont quite get the poem sorry
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