clear family haiku poem

cool clear light inside
family having dinner
outside, only dark


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7 comments:

  1. UnknownSeptember 18, 2008 at 9:07 PM

    Very strong image kouji, evokes fond childhood memories for me. Thanks :)

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2008 at 9:14 PM

    thanks for the comment, winter moth. :)

    glad it caused fond memories to surface for you. :)

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  3. JanetSeptember 19, 2008 at 8:41 AM

    I find myself dancing back and forth between the inside and the outside. great balance of light and dark.

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 19, 2008 at 8:51 AM

    thanks for the comment, janet. :)

    the last line came to me first, and i wrote the first two in response to that.

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  5. totomaiSeptember 23, 2008 at 12:14 PM

    oh yes, this is really a good one. i write haikus too. well. sometimes lol

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 24, 2008 at 12:29 AM

    thanks for the comment, totomai. :)

    cool that you write them too. :)

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  7. AnonymousNovember 14, 2009 at 5:35 AM

    i dont quite get the poem sorry

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