coins items haiku poem

coins at the bottom
of my bag, chipped and tarnished
the places they've seen


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8 comments:

  1. BorutSeptember 25, 2008 at 2:40 PM

    Yes, yes: mints, banks, purses, pockets, hands, cash registers...!?:)

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2008 at 5:29 PM

    thanks for the comment, borut. :)

    perhaps the bottoms of fountains, before being picked up again? :)

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  3. BorutSeptember 25, 2008 at 7:29 PM

    Perhaps the fortune-seeking ones!?:)

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2008 at 7:35 PM

    thanks for the comment, borut. :)

    indeed. or the lucky ones?

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2008 at 11:51 PM

    Cute poem :)

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2008 at 11:58 PM

    thanks for the comment, embracingeveryday. :)

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  7. Janice ThomsonSeptember 26, 2008 at 12:17 AM

    I like this - one gets a sense of freedom - of traveling here and there...

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  8. AnonymousSeptember 26, 2008 at 12:27 AM

    thanks for the comment, janice. :)

    i do like the idea of almost a secret kept by these inanimate objects, of places farther than imagined by their current owner.

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