drop news haiku poem

this unhappy day
the drops of water, they fall
cannot be undone


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a haiku poem for autumn haiku 2008, as well as one in recollection of 9-11 and its aftermath.


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12 comments:

  1. J. Andrew LockhartSeptember 11, 2008 at 8:54 AM

    very sad!

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2008 at 9:01 AM

    true, true, andrew.

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  3. david mcmahonSeptember 11, 2008 at 10:41 AM

    Nice work. Thanks for your comment on my canoe photo.

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2008 at 10:51 AM

    no problem, david. your photo made me want to get out on the water. though with all the rain, i'd probably get swamped. :O

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  5. magiceyeSeptember 11, 2008 at 1:58 PM

    poignant

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2008 at 2:00 PM

    thanks for the comment, magiceye.

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  7. BorutSeptember 11, 2008 at 2:22 PM

    Well, from raindrop point of view, life is a long and deep fall... No going back in this life...

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  8. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2008 at 2:26 PM

    good point, borut. thanks for stopping by.

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2008 at 11:09 PM

    Beautiful and sad, made me cry.

    :(

    we will NOT forget
    you 9/11 victims
    will get justice
    .

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2008 at 11:14 PM

    :( indeed. thanks for visiting, uspace.

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  11. Bear NakedSeptember 12, 2008 at 4:24 AM

    Wonderful and poignant haiku for today.

    Thank you for your thoughtful comments on my blog.
    They are appreciated very much.

    Bear((( )))

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  12. AnonymousSeptember 12, 2008 at 8:35 AM

    and thank you for your comments on mine, bear naked. i appreciate them as well. :)

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