restless nature haiku poem

restless leaves stirring
earth parched beneath a bright sky
heat before the storm


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a haiku poem for autumn haiku 2008


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8 comments:

  1. polonaSeptember 24, 2008 at 5:05 AM

    this has a very summery feel to me

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  2. JanetSeptember 24, 2008 at 6:00 AM

    I like this very much- it has such an air of excitement about it.

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 24, 2008 at 10:08 AM

    thanks for the comment, polona. :)

    indeed. tropical country and all.

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 24, 2008 at 10:08 AM

    thanks for the comment, janet. :)

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  5. Crafty Green PoetSeptember 24, 2008 at 2:31 PM

    this really reminds me of just before the tropical storms in Malawi

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 24, 2008 at 2:37 PM

    thanks for the comment, crafty green poet. :)

    you've been to malawi? wow. :O

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  7. Janice ThomsonSeptember 26, 2008 at 12:05 AM

    One can feel the storm brewing... lovely Kouji

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  8. AnonymousSeptember 26, 2008 at 12:08 AM

    thanks for the comment, janice. :)

    kind of you to say.

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