a new bird outside
chirping in the morning sun
my cat's ears prick up
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I was talking of the disappearance of the sparrows with my mom today.
I like the chirping noise.
thanks for the comment, gautami tripathy. :)
i like the noise as well.
The cat in me enjoyed it!:)
thanks for the comment, borut. :)
interesting. :)
Lovely Kouji, this is one of those haiku that just hit the perfect note immediately. I love these ones more than the "money" series, though they were very good too.
thanks for the comment, wordcrafter. :)
am rather fond of this one as well. :)
watch out for the cat!! :)
I really do strive to be as good with haiku words as you. Another lovely.
I love your haiku. The imagery takes me there :)
my ears prick up too!
nice one!
PS: My blog 'Socio-Politically Inclined Onlooker' is updated.. do visit when time allows...perhpas it might interest you..
thanks for the comment, andrew. :)
hmmm... chirping stopped... uh oh... :O
thanks for the comment, tsannie. :)
and thanks for the kind words and visit. :)
thanks for the comment, momisodes. :)
thanks for the kind words. :)
Yes, your cats probably thinking how good it would taste! :D
enjoyed this
john
thanks for the comment, devika. :)
will drop by your blog later. :)
thanks for the comment, winter moth. :)
oh, i'm sure my cat wants to befriend the bird... :D
thanks for the comment, john. :)
glad you enjoyed it. :)
ha, it's the cat's nature... enjoyed
thanks for the comment, polona. :)
indeed. my cat and i have a complex relationship. glad you enjoyed. :)
hey that was a pretty good one gave me an idea for a school project
*thanks*
thanks for the comment, anonymous. :)
glad i could help. :)
I was wondering about my comment here Kouji and then Andrews -- he is right..you never know who the cats are -- especially those who know mimicking the bird...and then get into their bags coolly...
i came tracking the last comment - i normally reach blogs that way. I never had a link to you for long...
so now, over to your new ones :-)
wishes!
devika
thanks for the comment, devika. :)
glad you could visit. :)
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