bird nature haiku poem

a new bird outside
chirping in the morning sun
my cat's ears prick up


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24 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

I was talking of the disappearance of the sparrows with my mom today.

I like the chirping noise.

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, gautami tripathy. :)

i like the noise as well.

Borut said...

The cat in me enjoyed it!:)

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, borut. :)

interesting. :)

Wordcrafter said...

Lovely Kouji, this is one of those haiku that just hit the perfect note immediately. I love these ones more than the "money" series, though they were very good too.

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, wordcrafter. :)

am rather fond of this one as well. :)

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

watch out for the cat!! :)

TSannie said...

I really do strive to be as good with haiku words as you. Another lovely.

Momisodes said...

I love your haiku. The imagery takes me there :)

Devika said...

my ears prick up too!
nice one!




PS: My blog 'Socio-Politically Inclined Onlooker' is updated.. do visit when time allows...perhpas it might interest you..

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, andrew. :)

hmmm... chirping stopped... uh oh... :O

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, tsannie. :)

and thanks for the kind words and visit. :)

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, momisodes. :)

thanks for the kind words. :)

Winter Moth said...

Yes, your cats probably thinking how good it would taste! :D

John McDonald said...

enjoyed this
john

kouji | haiku said...

thanks for the comment, devika. :)

will drop by your blog later. :)

kouji | haiku said...

thanks for the comment, winter moth. :)

oh, i'm sure my cat wants to befriend the bird... :D

kouji | haiku said...

thanks for the comment, john. :)

glad you enjoyed it. :)

polona said...

ha, it's the cat's nature... enjoyed

kouji | haiku said...

thanks for the comment, polona. :)

indeed. my cat and i have a complex relationship. glad you enjoyed. :)

Anonymous said...

hey that was a pretty good one gave me an idea for a school project
*thanks*

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, anonymous. :)

glad i could help. :)

Devika said...

I was wondering about my comment here Kouji and then Andrews -- he is right..you never know who the cats are -- especially those who know mimicking the bird...and then get into their bags coolly...

i came tracking the last comment - i normally reach blogs that way. I never had a link to you for long...

so now, over to your new ones :-)

wishes!
devika

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, devika. :)

glad you could visit. :)

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