bird nature haiku poem

a new bird outside
chirping in the morning sun
my cat's ears prick up


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24 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 6, 2008 at 9:03 PM

    I was talking of the disappearance of the sparrows with my mom today.

    I like the chirping noise.

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  2. AnonymousOctober 7, 2008 at 12:34 AM

    thanks for the comment, gautami tripathy. :)

    i like the noise as well.

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  3. BorutOctober 7, 2008 at 2:07 AM

    The cat in me enjoyed it!:)

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  4. AnonymousOctober 7, 2008 at 2:52 AM

    thanks for the comment, borut. :)

    interesting. :)

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  5. Beatrice VOctober 7, 2008 at 2:55 AM

    Lovely Kouji, this is one of those haiku that just hit the perfect note immediately. I love these ones more than the "money" series, though they were very good too.

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  6. AnonymousOctober 7, 2008 at 4:20 AM

    thanks for the comment, wordcrafter. :)

    am rather fond of this one as well. :)

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  7. J. Andrew LockhartOctober 7, 2008 at 11:15 AM

    watch out for the cat!! :)

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  8. abbOctober 7, 2008 at 11:19 AM

    I really do strive to be as good with haiku words as you. Another lovely.

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  9. MomisodesOctober 7, 2008 at 12:51 PM

    I love your haiku. The imagery takes me there :)

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  10. Devika JyothiOctober 7, 2008 at 2:50 PM

    my ears prick up too!
    nice one!




    PS: My blog 'Socio-Politically Inclined Onlooker' is updated.. do visit when time allows...perhpas it might interest you..

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  11. AnonymousOctober 7, 2008 at 2:51 PM

    thanks for the comment, andrew. :)

    hmmm... chirping stopped... uh oh... :O

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  12. AnonymousOctober 7, 2008 at 2:51 PM

    thanks for the comment, tsannie. :)

    and thanks for the kind words and visit. :)

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  13. AnonymousOctober 7, 2008 at 2:52 PM

    thanks for the comment, momisodes. :)

    thanks for the kind words. :)

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  14. UnknownOctober 7, 2008 at 3:38 PM

    Yes, your cats probably thinking how good it would taste! :D

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  15. John McDonaldOctober 7, 2008 at 6:17 PM

    enjoyed this
    john

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  16. AnonymousOctober 7, 2008 at 8:06 PM

    thanks for the comment, devika. :)

    will drop by your blog later. :)

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  17. AnonymousOctober 7, 2008 at 8:07 PM

    thanks for the comment, winter moth. :)

    oh, i'm sure my cat wants to befriend the bird... :D

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  18. AnonymousOctober 7, 2008 at 8:07 PM

    thanks for the comment, john. :)

    glad you enjoyed it. :)

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  19. polonaOctober 8, 2008 at 2:39 AM

    ha, it's the cat's nature... enjoyed

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  20. AnonymousOctober 8, 2008 at 4:38 AM

    thanks for the comment, polona. :)

    indeed. my cat and i have a complex relationship. glad you enjoyed. :)

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  21. AnonymousNovember 4, 2008 at 8:48 AM

    hey that was a pretty good one gave me an idea for a school project
    *thanks*

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  22. AnonymousNovember 6, 2008 at 1:42 AM

    thanks for the comment, anonymous. :)

    glad i could help. :)

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  23. Devika JyothiNovember 6, 2008 at 8:38 AM

    I was wondering about my comment here Kouji and then Andrews -- he is right..you never know who the cats are -- especially those who know mimicking the bird...and then get into their bags coolly...

    i came tracking the last comment - i normally reach blogs that way. I never had a link to you for long...

    so now, over to your new ones :-)

    wishes!
    devika

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  24. AnonymousNovember 7, 2008 at 7:00 AM

    thanks for the comment, devika. :)

    glad you could visit. :)

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