a haiku poem

flashing lights, screeching
tires, going nowhere
on a one-way street


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this is a haiku poem from my second guest blogger, my friend, marah q. :) she told me over yahoo messenger that she woke up one morning, with these lines already in her mind. :O


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18 comments:

  1. it reminded me of Delhi roads..:-)
    Life the same everywhere?

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  2. thanks for the comment, devika. :)

    perhaps. but maybe roads in some countries are safer than others? :)

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  3. It is true words can come to you like that life is the same everywhere!

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  4. thanks for the comment, winter moth. :)

    indeed.

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  5. thanks for the comment, art and poetry. :)

    i wonder if i'll ever dream up a haiku...

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  6. Adam - Creadiv.comOctober 7, 2008 at 8:49 PM

    You haven't been camped out at my house watching my neighbors have you? Because I can't get away from this nonsense. :)

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  7. wow, its great that you are exchanging haikus with friends!

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  8. thanks for the comment, adam. :)

    was just about to write a haiku about your other neighbor actually... :D

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  9. thanks for the comment, spool artist. :)

    indeed. also a bit surprising actually.

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  10. thanks for the comment, gillena cox. :)

    and thanks for visiting. :)

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  11. thanks for the comment, polona. :)

    indeed.

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  12. one way street
    does not know
    where it is going to

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  13. thanks for the comment, tikkis. :)

    indeed. that's a long road.

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  14. I like this haiku. It's great to see other people keeping a daily haiku blog! Thanks for all the comments you have made on mine. :)

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  15. thanks for the comment, stacy. :)

    true. i like looking at other people's daily haiku blogs as well. :)

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