flashing lights, screeching
tires, going nowhere
on a one-way street
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this is a haiku poem from my second guest blogger, my friend, marah q. :) she told me over yahoo messenger that she woke up one morning, with these lines already in her mind. :O
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thank you for visiting this haiku poem blog. :)
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18 comments:
it reminded me of Delhi roads..:-)
Life the same everywhere?
thanks for the comment, devika. :)
perhaps. but maybe roads in some countries are safer than others? :)
Kudos to your friend. :)
It is true words can come to you like that life is the same everywhere!
thanks for the comment, winter moth. :)
indeed.
thanks for the comment, art and poetry. :)
i wonder if i'll ever dream up a haiku...
You haven't been camped out at my house watching my neighbors have you? Because I can't get away from this nonsense. :)
wow, its great that you are exchanging haikus with friends!
nice one
much love
gillena
a typical urban scene...
thanks for the comment, adam. :)
was just about to write a haiku about your other neighbor actually... :D
thanks for the comment, spool artist. :)
indeed. also a bit surprising actually.
thanks for the comment, gillena cox. :)
and thanks for visiting. :)
thanks for the comment, polona. :)
indeed.
one way street
does not know
where it is going to
thanks for the comment, tikkis. :)
indeed. that's a long road.
I like this haiku. It's great to see other people keeping a daily haiku blog! Thanks for all the comments you have made on mine. :)
thanks for the comment, stacy. :)
true. i like looking at other people's daily haiku blogs as well. :)
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