asthma haiku poem

chill already
take a breath
... i can't

a haiku example based on this site about allergic asthma

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  1. thanks for the comment, gem. :)


  2. That's a very powerful image Kouji - such a horrid disease asthma is.

  3. thanks for the comment, janice thomson. :)

    indeed. i suffered from asthma as a kid. was pretty difficult. and it sucked that for a while there, it affected my ability to play and do sports.


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