asthma haiku poem

chill already
take a breath
... i can't


----
a haiku example based on this site about allergic asthma


----
possibly related haiku examples:

----
thank you for visiting this haiku poetry blog. :)

labels:

4 comments:

  1. GemNovember 2, 2008 at 1:22 AM

    Poor kid. Help!

    ReplyDelete
  2. AnonymousNovember 2, 2008 at 2:04 PM

    thanks for the comment, gem. :)

    indeed.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Janice ThomsonNovember 3, 2008 at 11:59 AM

    That's a very powerful image Kouji - such a horrid disease asthma is.

    ReplyDelete
  4. AnonymousNovember 4, 2008 at 7:52 AM

    thanks for the comment, janice thomson. :)

    indeed. i suffered from asthma as a kid. was pretty difficult. and it sucked that for a while there, it affected my ability to play and do sports.

    ReplyDelete

* thank you very much for leaving a comment. :)

* each comment goes into the moderation queue, as part of my attempt to protect the comment spaces from spam. i usually check this blog daily though, so comments tend to be published within a day or so. :)

* again, thanks for commenting. :)

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)

recent haiku poems: