autumn goodbye haiku poem

breeze blowing
through auburn leaves
she waves goodbye


a haiku poem for autumn haiku 2008.


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20 comments:

  1. Devika JyothiNovember 16, 2008 at 1:15 PM

    In a way, it seems a good time to wave good bye,
    but until the last bye (do one get a chance to wave then - God knows!), life has to go on...

    wishes!
    devika

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  2. J. Andrew LockhartNovember 16, 2008 at 1:41 PM

    very nice! :)

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  3. Maria VerivakiNovember 16, 2008 at 2:15 PM

    so winter is coming? we still havent turned on any heating but it is getting cold

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  4. Art and PoetryNovember 16, 2008 at 7:57 PM

    This is nice so simple and nice!

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  5. BorutNovember 16, 2008 at 9:48 PM

    Leaving a feeling of being aflame!?:)

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  6. Crafty Green PoetNovember 16, 2008 at 11:08 PM

    very melacholy poem, nice juxtaposition

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  7. MauigirlNovember 17, 2008 at 3:45 AM

    Just realized I didn't have your blog linked on mine! Am adding it.

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  8. polonaNovember 17, 2008 at 4:10 AM

    wonderul - love it!

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  9. AnonymousNovember 17, 2008 at 7:48 AM

    I love this Haiku kouji. In fact I love all your Haiku's, you are the Haiku Goddess. Thankyou, your friend from the USA, Lori Cordeiro

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  10. koujiNovember 17, 2008 at 10:18 AM

    thanks for the comment, devika. :)

    indeed. life just keeps on moving on...

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  11. koujiNovember 17, 2008 at 10:18 AM

    thanks for the comment, andrew. :)

    i'm glad you like it. :)

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  12. koujiNovember 17, 2008 at 10:20 AM

    thanks for the comment, mediterranean kiwi. :)

    interesting. over here, the idea of heating a house is mostly quite an unfamiliar one. :)

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  13. koujiNovember 17, 2008 at 10:20 AM

    thanks for the comment, art and poetry. :)

    glad you like it. :)

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  14. koujiNovember 17, 2008 at 10:21 AM

    thanks for the comment, borut. :)

    perhaps a final flame? :)

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  15. koujiNovember 17, 2008 at 10:21 AM

    thanks for the comment, crafty green poet. :)

    and thanks for the kind words. :)

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  16. koujiNovember 17, 2008 at 10:22 AM

    thanks for the comment, mauigirl. :)

    reminds me. i haven't updated my blogroll page in ages. :O

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  17. koujiNovember 17, 2008 at 10:22 AM

    thanks for the comment, polona. :)

    glad you like it. :)

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  18. koujiNovember 17, 2008 at 10:23 AM

    thanks for the comment, lori cordeiro. :)

    i'm glad you like them. :) but wait... i'm a guy! :D

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  19. Janice ThomsonNovember 18, 2008 at 2:20 AM

    Wonderfully melancholic - love this Kouji.

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  20. koujiNovember 18, 2008 at 11:46 AM

    @janice thomson

    i'm glad you like it. :)

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