park bench haiku poem

silent old man
worn park bench
autumn leaves whisper


a haiku example for autumn haiku 2008.


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16 comments:

  1. Adventure girlNovember 14, 2008 at 9:38 AM

    I could visualize them sitting there;)

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  2. GemNovember 15, 2008 at 12:32 AM

    This is cute! Something different. Contrast between an old man and the autumn leaves.

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  3. Janice ThomsonNovember 15, 2008 at 3:24 AM

    Very poignant haiku. Beautiful.

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  4. Maria VerivakiNovember 15, 2008 at 4:23 AM

    very secretive today!

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  5. AnonymousNovember 15, 2008 at 5:35 AM

    Love the message.

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  6. JadeNovember 15, 2008 at 8:29 AM

    perfectomundo.

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  7. koujiNovember 15, 2008 at 3:30 PM

    thanks for the comment, adventure girl wanna be. :)

    glad you could stop by. :)

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  8. koujiNovember 15, 2008 at 3:30 PM

    thanks for the comment, gem. :)

    indeed. wanted to do an autumn haiku which felt a little bit different. :)

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  9. koujiNovember 15, 2008 at 3:31 PM

    thanks for the comment, janice thomson. :)

    i'm glad you like it. :)

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  10. koujiNovember 15, 2008 at 3:31 PM

    thanks for the comment, mediterranean kiwi. :)

    maybe a bit. :)

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  11. koujiNovember 15, 2008 at 3:32 PM

    thanks for the comment, jodapoet. :)

    glad you like it. :)

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  12. koujiNovember 15, 2008 at 3:32 PM

    thanks for the comment, jade. :)

    glad you could visit. :)

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  13. TikkisNovember 15, 2008 at 9:50 PM

    I had to go and see your maple tree, took a photo and wrote a short greeting!

    (You remember that maple tree...?)

    Tikkis 2008-11-15

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  14. the spool artistNovember 16, 2008 at 2:07 AM

    you really ought to experience real autumn soon kouji! there's so much beauty unfolding in your words!

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  15. koujiNovember 16, 2008 at 11:33 AM

    thanks for the comment, tikkis. :)

    i do remember. :D will swing by your blog later to check. :) thanks. :)

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  16. koujiNovember 16, 2008 at 11:34 AM

    thanks for the comment, spool artist. :)

    perhaps one of these days. :) am running out of make believe autumn images for my haiku! :O

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