autumn nature haiku poems

wind carries
a leaf away
sweet release


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also posted for autumn haiku 2008


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19 comments:

  1. T.R. MintzNovember 8, 2008 at 5:48 AM

    I've recently become a fan of poetry so I enjoyed this blog.I posted my top ten blog picks on the 4th.Although you weren't in the running for this month's blog because your blog was submitted after I'd already picked my top ten,your blog is still in the running for next month's list.I really like your poems,keep writing them and I'll keep reading them and you have a great chance of making the list.Thanks for your interest in The Top Ten.

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  2. UnknownNovember 8, 2008 at 8:36 AM

    I lost your blog link for a few days! I was desparately worried I wouldn't find you again! I love your haiku's! You are so talented. And kind. I love kind people!

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  3. Art and PoetryNovember 8, 2008 at 8:00 PM

    Nice one!

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  4. AnonymousNovember 9, 2008 at 5:26 AM

    Simply lovely.

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  5. GemNovember 9, 2008 at 12:16 PM

    I hope this sweet release is as simple as forgetting someone I loved.

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  6. koujiNovember 9, 2008 at 12:37 PM

    thanks for the comment, t.r. mintz. :)

    it's gratifying to hear that you like what i write. thanks. :)

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  7. koujiNovember 9, 2008 at 1:15 PM

    thanks for the comment, life with kaishon. :)

    thanks for the kind words. :) i find a lot of very kind people wandering around in the haiku circles, as well as on other blogs online. :)

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  8. koujiNovember 9, 2008 at 1:16 PM

    thanks for the comment, art and poetry. :)

    am glad you like it. :)

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  9. koujiNovember 9, 2008 at 1:17 PM

    thanks for the comment, jodapoet. :)

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  10. koujiNovember 9, 2008 at 1:18 PM

    thanks for the comment, gem. :)

    ah. that can be difficult. :O

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  11. Devika JyothiNovember 9, 2008 at 11:18 PM

    Wind fails to carry away some..

    some leaves just float around, sweetly :-)


    wishes!
    devika

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  12. polonaNovember 10, 2008 at 12:42 AM

    a nice series again...

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  13. AnonymousNovember 10, 2008 at 7:10 PM

    I am not familiar with haiku. As poetry, are they always so short?

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  14. koujiNovember 11, 2008 at 5:55 AM

    thanks for the comment, devika. :)

    indeed. refusing to touch down. :)

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  15. koujiNovember 11, 2008 at 5:55 AM

    thanks for the comment, polona. :)

    am glad you like it. :)

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  16. koujiNovember 11, 2008 at 5:56 AM

    thanks for the comment, sire. :)

    yup, i believe so. usually set at three lines, and at or under 17 syllables.

    thanks for visiting. :)

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  17. AnonymousNovember 11, 2008 at 3:01 PM

    Veeeerrry interesting...that "sweet release" fitting so well with the leaf, but so unexpectedly....

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  18. koujiNovember 12, 2008 at 7:01 AM

    thanks for the comment, yoga for cynics. :)

    am glad you could drop by.

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  19. AnonymousMarch 9, 2009 at 2:34 AM

    Not so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can do better

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