cebu photography haiku poem

old man
face wrinkled
as he smiles

a haiku example based on this post on Cebu Photography :)

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  1. Very beautiful near-photographic image....

  2. Very dramatic... and lovely - in haiku-speak!

    And the old man seemed to have no teeth anymore... hehehe.

  3. thanks for the comment, yoga for cynics. :)

    I'm glad you like it.

  4. thanks for the comment, gem. :)

    True. I liked the fact that there was the picture of the old man, who doesn't appear to have any more teeth, and yet he was still giving a big smile. :)


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