cebu photography haiku poem

old man
face wrinkled
as he smiles


a haiku example based on this post on Cebu Photography :)


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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 11, 2008 at 3:00 PM

    Very beautiful near-photographic image....

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  2. GemNovember 11, 2008 at 6:13 PM

    Very dramatic... and lovely - in haiku-speak!

    And the old man seemed to have no teeth anymore... hehehe.

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  3. koujiNovember 12, 2008 at 7:06 AM

    thanks for the comment, yoga for cynics. :)

    I'm glad you like it.

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  4. koujiNovember 12, 2008 at 7:09 AM

    thanks for the comment, gem. :)

    True. I liked the fact that there was the picture of the old man, who doesn't appear to have any more teeth, and yet he was still giving a big smile. :)

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