short love haiku poem

why is it so hard
to write just three lines
on love?


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11 comments:

  1. good question
    I have wondered this
    too my friend:-)

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  2. The simpel one:
    I
    Love
    You

    but the again its old news - maybe:

    I throw a coin
    in the well of your eyes
    your wish is my command

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  3. Because those three lines hold a lot of meaning?

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  4. thanks for the comment, janet. :)

    indeed. it can be quite tough. :O

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  5. thanks for the comment, ashi. :)

    ah. cool haiku. :)

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  6. thanks for the comment, gem. :)

    so true. quite difficult. :O

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  7. Love forme is the musi of silence, the roar of oceans, the wind swaying on treetops, the sun glowing on a sunflower...

    how can we ever put in three lines -- will it help if we say that in three lines :-)

    but Ashi has a point, not easy though...

    wishes!
    devika

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  8. Why not simply try just one line:
    I love you

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  9. thanks for the comment, devika. :)

    true. the idea of love's just quite vast. :)

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  10. thanks for the comment, tikkis. :)

    indeed. :) still, would love to be able to have some striking imagery to go along with it. :)

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