short love haiku poem

why is it so hard
to write just three lines
on love?


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11 comments:

  1. JanetNovember 8, 2008 at 11:30 AM

    good question
    I have wondered this
    too my friend:-)

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  2. AshiNovember 8, 2008 at 2:58 PM

    The simpel one:
    I
    Love
    You

    but the again its old news - maybe:

    I throw a coin
    in the well of your eyes
    your wish is my command

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  3. GemNovember 9, 2008 at 12:17 PM

    Because those three lines hold a lot of meaning?

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  4. koujiNovember 9, 2008 at 12:31 PM

    thanks for the comment, janet. :)

    indeed. it can be quite tough. :O

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  5. koujiNovember 9, 2008 at 12:32 PM

    thanks for the comment, ashi. :)

    ah. cool haiku. :)

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  6. koujiNovember 9, 2008 at 12:32 PM

    thanks for the comment, gem. :)

    so true. quite difficult. :O

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  7. Devika JyothiNovember 9, 2008 at 11:24 PM

    Love forme is the musi of silence, the roar of oceans, the wind swaying on treetops, the sun glowing on a sunflower...

    how can we ever put in three lines -- will it help if we say that in three lines :-)

    but Ashi has a point, not easy though...

    wishes!
    devika

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  8. TikkisNovember 11, 2008 at 3:27 AM

    Why not simply try just one line:
    I love you

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  9. AnonymousNovember 11, 2008 at 5:48 AM

    thanks for the comment, devika. :)

    true. the idea of love's just quite vast. :)

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  10. AnonymousNovember 11, 2008 at 5:49 AM

    thanks for the comment, tikkis. :)

    indeed. :) still, would love to be able to have some striking imagery to go along with it. :)

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 5, 2010 at 10:01 PM

    WEH :))

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