why is it so hard
to write just three lines
on love?
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good question
ReplyDeleteI have wondered this
too my friend:-)
The simpel one:
ReplyDeleteI
Love
You
but the again its old news - maybe:
I throw a coin
in the well of your eyes
your wish is my command
Because those three lines hold a lot of meaning?
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, janet. :)
ReplyDeleteindeed. it can be quite tough. :O
thanks for the comment, ashi. :)
ReplyDeleteah. cool haiku. :)
thanks for the comment, gem. :)
ReplyDeleteso true. quite difficult. :O
Love forme is the musi of silence, the roar of oceans, the wind swaying on treetops, the sun glowing on a sunflower...
ReplyDeletehow can we ever put in three lines -- will it help if we say that in three lines :-)
but Ashi has a point, not easy though...
wishes!
devika
Why not simply try just one line:
ReplyDeleteI love you
thanks for the comment, devika. :)
ReplyDeletetrue. the idea of love's just quite vast. :)
thanks for the comment, tikkis. :)
ReplyDeleteindeed. :) still, would love to be able to have some striking imagery to go along with it. :)
WEH :))
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