remember house haiku poem | a haiku poem blog

remember house haiku poem

can't quite remember

the last time i

left the house

a haiku poem based on this post at the haiku diaries. :)

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4 comments:

Ken said...: The surprise ending is very effective. Closes well.; December 4, 2008 11:12 AM
kouji said...: @ken

thanks. :); December 4, 2008 3:02 PM
Janice Thomson said...: I like this - leaves me with a couple different viewpoints. Excellent Kouji.; December 5, 2008 11:21 AM
kouji said...: @janice thomson

thanks. :) i'm glad you like it.; December 6, 2008 7:14 PM

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