snow footprints haiku poem

footprints
in the snow
i leave no trace


a haiku poem for winter haiku 2008/2009. :)


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24 comments:

  1. UnknownDecember 3, 2008 at 10:34 PM

    I love snowprints : ). Just as pretty as can be!

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  2. AshiDecember 4, 2008 at 1:14 AM

    If you did not leave the house (As suggested in previous post) you can't leave any footprint, so who did?

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  3. AnonymousDecember 4, 2008 at 1:42 AM

    Hello kouji,
    I loved this poem, we have not had any snow yet, but I can't wait for it to come!

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  4. GemDecember 4, 2008 at 9:35 AM

    Snow time! The autumn's over. Your footprints last autumn were also lost...

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  5. AnonymousDecember 4, 2008 at 11:12 AM

    This one works quite well in both image and thought. Thanks.

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  6. koujiDecember 4, 2008 at 3:06 PM

    @life with kaishon

    ah. never actually seen one. :)

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  7. koujiDecember 4, 2008 at 3:06 PM

    @ashi

    yeti perhaps? :O

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  8. koujiDecember 4, 2008 at 3:07 PM

    @lori cordeiro

    cool. no snow here at all, no matter what month of the year. :O

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  9. koujiDecember 4, 2008 at 3:08 PM

    @gem

    indeed. :O

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  10. koujiDecember 4, 2008 at 3:09 PM

    @ken

    cool. thanks. i also enjoyed visiting your haiku blog. :) and it's cool to see another haiku blog which is seo'd. :)

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  11. Gillena CoxDecember 4, 2008 at 8:17 PM

    love this poem a lot; i remember my first experience of snow, i didn't leave any footprints either, i just stood at the open door and gaped; it was awsome! I was on vacation at the time, in New York. I live in a Caribbean republic - Trinidad and Tobago here we have no winters.

    much love
    gillena

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  12. AnonymousDecember 5, 2008 at 6:47 AM

    I love snow haiku --
    there's texture, temperature,
    and shades of whiteness.

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  13. J. Andrew LockhartDecember 5, 2008 at 1:26 PM

    very nice :)

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  14. Crafty Green PoetDecember 5, 2008 at 10:31 PM

    lovely image, I love deep snow,

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  15. Mr. WilsonDecember 6, 2008 at 1:51 PM

    nice post..please come by to my blog too..

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  16. koujiDecember 6, 2008 at 7:15 PM

    @gillena cox

    ah. :) we have no winter over here where i live as well. :O

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  17. koujiDecember 6, 2008 at 7:16 PM

    @rachelbirds

    indeed. thanks for dropping by. :)

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  18. koujiDecember 6, 2008 at 7:16 PM

    @andrew

    thanks. :)

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  19. koujiDecember 6, 2008 at 7:16 PM

    @crafty green poet

    thanks. :) glad you like it. :)

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  20. koujiDecember 6, 2008 at 7:18 PM

    @mr. wilson

    thanks. :) i'll try to drop by.

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  21. AnonymousDecember 29, 2008 at 10:54 AM

    I really like this Haiku !
    So, I'd like to say ...

    " Snow melts
    Lovely sun
    Footprints appear ! "

    :)

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  22. AnonymousJanuary 7, 2009 at 3:26 AM

    This isn't a haiku - they are supposed to have 5 syllables on the first line, 7 on the second, and 5 on the last. What you wrote is just a very short poem.

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  23. HoneyBeeMay 13, 2009 at 3:57 PM

    No winter, but imagination. Profound.

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  24. BillJune 11, 2009 at 11:08 PM

    first snow
    the wind leaves
    no footprints

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