haiku poem

busy thoroughfare
cars, trucks barreling along
a trembling kitten


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a haiku poem inspired by this site:

MeFindHome.org: Homeless Cats & Dogs for Adoption


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30 comments:

  1. haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)October 9, 2008 at 3:56 AM

    what a contrast!
    the noisy and dangerous traffic and then a kitten!

    well done!

    best wishes,
    Angelika

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  2. Wayfaring WandererOctober 9, 2008 at 4:11 AM

    Let's hope he didn't make the wrong move!?!?!

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  3. UnknownOctober 9, 2008 at 6:13 AM

    So sweet. LOVE this haiku!

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  4. atto aryoOctober 9, 2008 at 2:21 PM

    this is a novel blog. nai-inspire na rin tuloy akong gumawa ng haiku. :-)yun nga lang baka ang lumabas e hai(na)ku!

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  5. AnonymousOctober 9, 2008 at 3:16 PM

    thanks for the comment, angelika. :)

    and thanks for the kind words. :)

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  6. AnonymousOctober 9, 2008 at 3:17 PM

    thanks for the comment, wayfaring wanderer. :)

    i think this particular cat was saved by concerned persons. :)

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  7. AnonymousOctober 9, 2008 at 3:18 PM

    thanks for the comment, rebeckah. :)

    am glad you liked it. :)

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  8. AnonymousOctober 9, 2008 at 3:19 PM

    thanks for the comment, r-yo. :)

    i actually enjoy hai(na)ku. :D

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  9. Devika JyothiOctober 9, 2008 at 3:41 PM

    The trucks and kittens on the road :-)
    again so much the same here!

    i even imagine me as the terrified kitten :-)

    haiku/poetry and its themes are universal...i just love it more and more when I read haikus at different blogs we mostly see each other..

    see again, Kouji
    devika

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  10. AnonymousOctober 9, 2008 at 5:37 PM

    awwww. poor kitty.

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  11. AnonymousOctober 9, 2008 at 5:56 PM

    thanks for the comment, devika. :)

    true, true. it's nice that there's a haiku community, where we find ourselves visiting and commenting on each other's blogs. :)

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  12. AnonymousOctober 9, 2008 at 5:58 PM

    thanks for the comment, jeanie. :)

    indeed. this particular kitty was saved though. now they're trying to find the kitty a new home.

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  13. AnonymousOctober 9, 2008 at 10:44 PM

    Should have gone with a puppy. I hate cats. :)

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  14. AnonymousOctober 9, 2008 at 11:27 PM

    thanks for the comment, adam. :)

    maybe for the next haiku. :)

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  15. nonizamboniOctober 10, 2008 at 12:37 AM

    Wow, when I saw what inspired these words, they had an even bigger impact. Nicely done!

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  16. Maria VerivakiOctober 10, 2008 at 12:54 AM

    in a sense, funny

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  17. the spool artistOctober 10, 2008 at 1:29 AM

    wow, it's amazing where you get your inspirations for your haiku... you are a true artist in finding meaning and poetry everywhere you look!

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  18. AnonymousOctober 10, 2008 at 2:32 AM

    thanks for the comment, nonizamboni. :)

    and thanks for the kind words.

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  19. AnonymousOctober 10, 2008 at 2:32 AM

    thanks for the comment, mediterranean kiwi.

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  20. AnonymousOctober 10, 2008 at 2:33 AM

    thanks for the comment, spool artist. :)

    and thanks also for the kind words. :)

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  21. BorutOctober 10, 2008 at 1:28 PM

    Truly micro-cosmic!:)

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  22. AnonymousOctober 10, 2008 at 1:39 PM

    thanks for the comment, borut. :)

    society in a kitty? :)

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  23. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 7:11 PM

    ha, that's really evocative (and that's the first time I've used that word)

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  24. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 9:47 PM

    thanks for the comment, andy bailey. :)

    cool. am honored you used that word. glad you could drop by. :)

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  25. polonaOctober 17, 2008 at 1:48 AM

    that should read freerice, of course :)

    (i really am having trouble commenting here, and i wonder if it's my computer or is the site really loading that slow...)

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  26. AnonymousOctober 17, 2008 at 1:53 AM

    thanks for the comment, polona. :)

    i wonder why that is. it's probably this site. just not sure why. :(

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  27. totomaiOctober 18, 2008 at 7:16 AM

    oh i can imagine how the cat tremble. very nice ku

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  28. AnonymousOctober 18, 2008 at 6:10 PM

    thanks for the comment, totomai. :)

    indeed. i'm just glad this particular cat was saved.

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  29. AnonymousOctober 22, 2008 at 10:05 AM

    thanks, kouji. here's hoping everything worked out for the kitten. the image is all too real, i'm araid. too many kittens out there...

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  30. AnonymousOctober 22, 2008 at 10:11 AM

    thanks for the comment, sherwin. :)

    indeed. i do hope everything worked out for that cat.

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