haiku poem

busy thoroughfare
cars, trucks barreling along
a trembling kitten


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a haiku poem inspired by this site:

MeFindHome.org: Homeless Cats & Dogs for Adoption


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30 comments:

haiku-shelf said...

what a contrast!
the noisy and dangerous traffic and then a kitten!

well done!

best wishes,
Angelika

Wayfaring Wanderer said...

Let's hope he didn't make the wrong move!?!?!

Rebeckah said...

So sweet. LOVE this haiku!

r-yo said...

this is a novel blog. nai-inspire na rin tuloy akong gumawa ng haiku. :-)yun nga lang baka ang lumabas e hai(na)ku!

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, angelika. :)

and thanks for the kind words. :)

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, wayfaring wanderer. :)

i think this particular cat was saved by concerned persons. :)

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, rebeckah. :)

am glad you liked it. :)

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, r-yo. :)

i actually enjoy hai(na)ku. :D

Devika said...

The trucks and kittens on the road :-)
again so much the same here!

i even imagine me as the terrified kitten :-)

haiku/poetry and its themes are universal...i just love it more and more when I read haikus at different blogs we mostly see each other..

see again, Kouji
devika

jeanie said...

awwww. poor kitty.

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, devika. :)

true, true. it's nice that there's a haiku community, where we find ourselves visiting and commenting on each other's blogs. :)

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, jeanie. :)

indeed. this particular kitty was saved though. now they're trying to find the kitty a new home.

Adam said...

Should have gone with a puppy. I hate cats. :)

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, adam. :)

maybe for the next haiku. :)

nonizamboni said...

Wow, when I saw what inspired these words, they had an even bigger impact. Nicely done!

MEDITERRANEAN KIWI said...

in a sense, funny

the spool artist said...

wow, it's amazing where you get your inspirations for your haiku... you are a true artist in finding meaning and poetry everywhere you look!

kouji | haiku said...

thanks for the comment, nonizamboni. :)

and thanks for the kind words.

kouji said...

thanks for the comment, mediterranean kiwi.

kouji | haiku said...

thanks for the comment, spool artist. :)

and thanks also for the kind words. :)

Borut said...

Truly micro-cosmic!:)

kouji | haiku said...

thanks for the comment, borut. :)

society in a kitty? :)

Andy Bailey said...

ha, that's really evocative (and that's the first time I've used that word)

kouji haiku said...

thanks for the comment, andy bailey. :)

cool. am honored you used that word. glad you could drop by. :)

polona said...

that should read freerice, of course :)

(i really am having trouble commenting here, and i wonder if it's my computer or is the site really loading that slow...)

kouji haiku said...

thanks for the comment, polona. :)

i wonder why that is. it's probably this site. just not sure why. :(

totomai said...

oh i can imagine how the cat tremble. very nice ku

kouji haiku said...

thanks for the comment, totomai. :)

indeed. i'm just glad this particular cat was saved.

sherwin said...

thanks, kouji. here's hoping everything worked out for the kitten. the image is all too real, i'm araid. too many kittens out there...

kouji haiku said...

thanks for the comment, sherwin. :)

indeed. i do hope everything worked out for that cat.

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