autumn nature haiku poem

pond's still surface
disturbed
trees shed their leaves


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a haiku example for autumn haiku 2008


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5 comments:

  1. Lovely.. I wish to see that peaceful disturbance.

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  2. thanks for the comment, gem. :)

    me too. :)

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  3. I love ur poem!

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  4. that isn't even a haiku. A haiku's first line has to be five sylables, the second line should be seven, and the third should once again be five, nice poem, but terrible format

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  5. the haiku or what ever you called it wasn't a haiku

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