autumn nature haiku poem

pond's still surface
disturbed
trees shed their leaves


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a haiku example for autumn haiku 2008


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5 comments:

  1. GemNovember 2, 2008 at 1:19 AM

    Lovely.. I wish to see that peaceful disturbance.

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  2. AnonymousNovember 2, 2008 at 2:06 PM

    thanks for the comment, gem. :)

    me too. :)

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  3. AnonymousMay 6, 2009 at 11:32 PM

    I love ur poem!

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  4. AnonymousMay 20, 2009 at 3:28 AM

    that isn't even a haiku. A haiku's first line has to be five sylables, the second line should be seven, and the third should once again be five, nice poem, but terrible format

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  5. AnonymousMay 23, 2009 at 2:33 AM

    the haiku or what ever you called it wasn't a haiku

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