a haiku poem

flashing lights, screeching
tires, going nowhere
on a one-way street


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this is a haiku poem from my second guest blogger, my friend, marah q. :) she told me over yahoo messenger that she woke up one morning, with these lines already in her mind. :O


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18 comments:

  1. Devika JyothiOctober 7, 2008 at 2:47 PM

    it reminded me of Delhi roads..:-)
    Life the same everywhere?

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  2. AnonymousOctober 7, 2008 at 2:49 PM

    thanks for the comment, devika. :)

    perhaps. but maybe roads in some countries are safer than others? :)

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  3. UnknownOctober 7, 2008 at 3:35 PM

    Kudos to your friend. :)

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  4. Art and PoetryOctober 7, 2008 at 4:46 PM

    It is true words can come to you like that life is the same everywhere!

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  5. AnonymousOctober 7, 2008 at 8:04 PM

    thanks for the comment, winter moth. :)

    indeed.

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  6. AnonymousOctober 7, 2008 at 8:04 PM

    thanks for the comment, art and poetry. :)

    i wonder if i'll ever dream up a haiku...

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  7. AnonymousOctober 7, 2008 at 8:49 PM

    You haven't been camped out at my house watching my neighbors have you? Because I can't get away from this nonsense. :)

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  8. the spool artistOctober 7, 2008 at 11:12 PM

    wow, its great that you are exchanging haikus with friends!

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  9. Gillena CoxOctober 8, 2008 at 1:26 AM

    nice one


    much love
    gillena

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  10. polonaOctober 8, 2008 at 2:41 AM

    a typical urban scene...

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  11. AnonymousOctober 8, 2008 at 4:33 AM

    thanks for the comment, adam. :)

    was just about to write a haiku about your other neighbor actually... :D

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  12. AnonymousOctober 8, 2008 at 4:33 AM

    thanks for the comment, spool artist. :)

    indeed. also a bit surprising actually.

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  13. AnonymousOctober 8, 2008 at 4:35 AM

    thanks for the comment, gillena cox. :)

    and thanks for visiting. :)

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  14. AnonymousOctober 8, 2008 at 4:36 AM

    thanks for the comment, polona. :)

    indeed.

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  15. AnonymousOctober 10, 2008 at 2:56 AM

    one way street
    does not know
    where it is going to

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  16. AnonymousOctober 10, 2008 at 10:09 AM

    thanks for the comment, tikkis. :)

    indeed. that's a long road.

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  17. StacyOctober 14, 2008 at 9:21 AM

    I like this haiku. It's great to see other people keeping a daily haiku blog! Thanks for all the comments you have made on mine. :)

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  18. AnonymousOctober 14, 2008 at 11:18 AM

    thanks for the comment, stacy. :)

    true. i like looking at other people's daily haiku blogs as well. :)

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