lesbian haiku poem

she dated her long
rejected, heartbreak, phone call
solace with fam'ly


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a haiku poem inspired by this diary post


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8 comments:

  1. Thanks for your comment! I am not really good at haikus, so I cannot comment on them,I am afraid!

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  2. thanks for the comment, reader wil. :)

    glad you could visit. :)

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  3. I think this applies to all sorts of relationship choices...beautiful

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  4. thanks for the comment, janet. :)

    indeed. :)

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  5. visited the link. she is really lucky that her family accepted her as is :)
    although she's not in that kind of relationship currently.

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  6. thanks for the comment, merapuman. :)

    indeed. i like how her family took the news. :)

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  7. Kia ora!
    I'm curious about "fam'ly", presumably to show pronunciation as famly, with 2 syllables rather than with 3 as in fam-i-ly. I understand the reason for this in the last line. This is an old poetic use of the apostrophe.

    Perhaps I'm naive, but is it commonly used in haiku? I'm not lauching a criticism btw. I like the haiku.

    Ka kite
    from Middle-earth

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  8. thanks for the comment, blogger in middle earth. :)

    indeed. basically, i cheated. :O couldn't fit the words into the required number of syllables, so i cut one out. :O

    :)

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